What People are saying about KINGSLEY

Catherine Adams

Inkslinger Editing LLC


Catherine Adams, Developmental Editor

Catherine Adams, Developmental Editor

Dear Carolyn,

I’ve spent the past few days immersed in the ecological and genetic crises of KINGSLEY.  It seems fitting that the reading has happened in the liminal space “between the years” (as the Germans called the week between Christmas and New Year’s), as KINGLSEY has thrown me into an alternative reality that seems a horrific membrane away from the health and environmental tragedies sweeping through the world today.  The story left me stunned—and in a good way.______________________________________

Aimee Roberts

Masters in Writing, Rhetoric and Technical Communication 

Agent Marketing and IT Support Specialist for Kline May Realty 

Aimee Roberts  works as a personal branding and IT guru

Aimee Roberts works as a personal branding and IT guru

        …  creative and intriguing . . .  It was an excellent read! _______________________________

  C. E. (Claire) Cameron is a writer and educational psychologist.  Claire earned a PhD from the University of Michigan’s Combined Program in Education and Psychology. She is currently employed as a Research Scientist. 

C. E. (Claire) Cameron is a writer and educational psychologist. Her academic scholarship examines how children learn and develop. Her fiction and non-fiction further explores how we change throughout life by revealing individual stories of transformation.

C. E. (Claire) Cameron is a writer and educational psychologist. Her academic scholarship examines how children learn and develop. Her fiction and non-fiction further explores how we change throughout life by revealing individual stories of transformation.

KINGSLEY kept me reading – not only to see what the compelling and vivid characters would do in this thrilling, action-packed story. As an educational psychologist, I was most fascinated by the world without men. With each new scene and setting of KINGSLEY, I became more and more aware of how fundamentally everything would change without the “XY-ers” – and not for the better. This book reminds me of how interconnected beings of all species and ecosystems are, and how we have to take care of each other. It’s also a fun, if spooky, read that I could see being incorporated into science classes or even as part of a social or feminist studies curriculum. The narrative form or “cli-fi” novel is an important new way to communicate about our global ecological crisis, and Ms. O’Neal has done her genre proud. This book made me think, and it makes me want to take action. 


Writing takes discipline,  just ask the Hook’s famed contest judge John Grisham, who spends hours every single day at the keyboard, and has more than two dozen best sellers to his name.

The winners of  the HOOK’S 2013 Short Fiction Contest are further proof that putting in the time, day after day, year after year, can pay off.

Second place: Carolyn O’Neal

Second place winner Carolyn O’Neal found the inspiration for her story, “Silent Grace,”  last summer while reading an Esquire magazine article about the tar sands in Alberta, Canada.
“The oil that comes out of the Middle East is relatively clean,” she says. “The tar sands, they have to boil it down. You use a whole lot of fresh water. That means they’re diverting massive amounts of fresh water from everybody else.”

Her protagonist is a young First Nation girl whose life is affected by her family’s involvement in the tar sand operations, and O’Neal– who has honed her writing at WriterHouse under the tutelage of one-time Hook contest judge and 2009 second place contest winner David Ronka– hopes the topic will pique interest in the complexity and dangers of oil extraction, no matter where it takes place.

“Fiction can change the world,” she says. “That’s what I want to do– make people a little bit aware of what’s going on.”

O’Neal has also presented at the 2013 Virginia Festival of the Book on the topic HOW TO CREATE A GREAT WRITING GROUP.   She is a member of BACCAliteray. com.

BACCA Literary at Virginia Festival of the Book 2013!

Come join the four members of BACCA Literary at this FREE event at Virginia Festival of the Book.

We’ll talk about Creating a Great Writing Group.

Before there is a book to publish, before the agent, before the copyeditor, there is the intense process of writing. This session is by writers-in-progress, for writers-in-progress, and focuses on the process of becoming a better writer within a supportive community. Learn from the four members of BACCA Literary, a Charlottesville, VA writer group, how to build your own. Co-sponsored by WriterHouse (Charlottesville), where the members of BACCA first met.

Claire Cameron PhDA M CarleyBethany Joy CarlsonCarolyn O’Neal.

Mark your calendar!

WHEN:  10am, Saturday 23 March 2013.

WHERE:  The Omni Hotel, on the Downtown Mall in Charlottesville, VA.
Look for the Preston Room, inside The Pointe restaurant (turn Right inside the lobby doors, if you enter from the Downtown Mall).

  • Want to create your own writing group, or find out how to improve the one you’re in now?

  • Want to learn how to get help with your writing project, in a smart, supportive, ongoing environment?

  • Want to spend some time with other writers at a free event on a Saturday morning in a comfortable, windowed room on Publication Day at the Omni in Downtown Charlottesville?

See you there!

Shape Shifters

You’ve played the game.  If you were an animal, what animal would you be?  When I was  asked, I was given three options:  A Lion.  A St. Bernard dog.   Or an Owl.  Iconic creatures.  Magnificent creatures.  All worthy of being spiritual guides.  All represent qualities worth emulating.  Leadership.  Loyalty.   Wisdom.   But the question remained, if I were an animal, which one would I be.   My answer was none.  None were my totem   None my spiritual animal guide.  I didn’t relate to any of these animals.

Born Leader

Born Leader


Loyal and Caring

Loyal and Caring




Then I stumbled upon a nature show on PBS  investigating cuttlefish.   Heard of  cuttlefish ?  They’re aquatic invertebrates, related to the squid and octopus.  Very intelligent creatures . . .  for invertebrates.

It’s me!

They have rudimentary problem solving capabilities and can change skin tone to camouflage into their backgrounds.  I saw a photo on the internet of a cuttlefish placed on a checkerboard.  It’s skin went from looking like sand to looking like it was covered with  black and white squares.  Very cool.

But the truly interesting thing about these creatures is that their skin colors seem to reflect their emotions.  Anger, lust, fear.   Their skin can change into one color to attract a mate, another color to scare an adversary.  The nature program showed a cuttlefish caught between a mate and a rival.  It visually split itself in half and looked like a handsome stud to the pretty girl and a tough guy to his rival.

That’s It!   That’s my animal . . .  The Cuttlefish.

Cuttlefish have all the qualities I admire:  Intelligence, adaptability, flashy when the mood is right, unseen when they need to hide. Master of disguise, king of camouflage, survivor extraordinaire.  Watch NOVA’s special KINGS OF CAMOUFLAGE  for more info.

The Cuttlefish

The Cuttlefish wearing pinstripes. Must be a formal occasion.

“Imagine an alien that can float through space, with a giant brain shaped like a doughnut, eight arms growing out of its head, and three hearts pumping blue blood. This alien lives right here on Earth. It’s called the cuttlefish, a flesh-eating predator who’s a master of illusion, changing its shape and color at will. It can hypnotize its prey or even become invisible.”

Cuttlefish are seen and unseen, real and unreal, of this earth yet alien.   The perfect description of a writer.

I’m an on-line cuttlefish.  In my blogs, my facebook page, my twitter feed.  My on-line presence reflects my emotions, not only in words, but also in colors.   I actually have two blogs.  One professional, the second personal.  My professional blog started out with muted colors, the way professional blogs are supposed to be.  White and tan and maybe a bit of light blue to jazz it up.  But then life got in the way and something would make me happy or sad or piss me off and –  BAM – just like a cuttlefish, my blog changed colors to reflect my emotion.  Yellow or blue or bright red. Actually the bright red background was a photo of me standing in front of a bar in Dublin with a red door but only the red door showed. Red.  That’s a pissed off color.  Then, I thought about presenting here at the Festival of the Book and decided my red Irish bar background was a little too wild so I pulled back and now the background to my professional blog is a calm, blue and green seascape.

In my blue phase

In my blue phase

My other blog is more personal. 

The background is a photo of the inside of a cathedral with a bit of stain glass color, peeking out like a ray of hope.   It’s mostly dark gray and black. That’s my cancer journal.    I was diagnosed with endometrial cancer in December, had surgery in January, and am now undergoing radiation treatment at the amazing Emily Couric Cancer Center at UVA.  My prognosis is good but I’m not ready to change the dark gray background to something more cheerful.   Not yet.   Maybe after the radiation treatment is all over and I’ve been cancer free for a few years.    Maybe it will go to pink or yellow.  Something cheery.

I’m sharing all of this is just to point out the main advantage of being a writer.

The main advantage of being a writer is that for us, there’s no such thing as a bad experience.  Every experience informs our writing, whether positive or negative, whether speaking at the 2013 Virginia Festival of the Book or being diagnosed with cancer.  Each experience brings depth to our writing.

When you join a writing group, you are giving someone else (strangers, friends)  access to your pain.  Whether you write fiction, nonfiction or memoir.  These women and men are going to peer into your heart.  They’re going to see you emotionally naked.  So finding the right group is important.   You need to be in a group that is going to give you honest feedback, but is also going to respect your journey as a person.  No one can reveal their soul if they fear gossip and ridicule.

Trust is the cornerstone of any great writing group.